Ryzzle

[shadowpelt]

Hidden behind the mask

Name: Halle
Age: 14
Email: um...
Rp Experience: a few years

The Mask

Name: Ryzzle Vandaraz
Age: 17 years
Place of birth: Far and Unknown country named Garst
Gender: female
Home: an inn but is going to hopefully be invited to the palace
Position: Princess of Garst
Cannon or original: original
Face claim: Alexis Bledel
Appearance: Ryzzle has a petite small face with stunning blue eyes. She has wavy black hair with a little curl. It comes down to her shoulders and her bangs are cut short on her forehead. She has a small pert nose that rest above her thin but full cherry red lips. Her head rest on a long and thin neck upon slightly broadened shoulders. Attached upon her shoulders are long arms that hold elegant hands with long thin fingers with extravagant nails. Her shorter torso leads down to small hips and long legs. On the end are small feet.
Personality: Ryzzle is very smart and cunning. She thinks fast but always double checks. She can be sort of well 'dizzy in the head' because she likes to flirt but don't let that fool you. She is gentle but can be harsh if annoyed. She is very emotional and she doesn't like to show it. She can also have a fierce temper when angered and will not be treated less than a noble.
History: Ryzzle was born to her mother but her mother died of child complications killing her second sibling. She was the second child and her older sibling was a boy named Zavier. Her brother was sweet and charming but horrid to Ryzzle. Her father, the king, always
like Zavier more and never paid attention to Ryzzle. She was stuck with the bad suitors and given horrible gowns. Ryzzle always loved animals and nature so she spent most of her time in the surrounding forest with her teacher, a mage. She actually contained a very special gift, wild magic. Her teacher would show her the elements of magic and she soon knew almost everything. Though that day she returned to the palace and found out her father died, so her brother became king and banished Ryzzle from his country from the fear of her taking over his thrown. She journeyed very far and for almost a year, until she found Tortall and learned about the palace, Corus. Know she plans to introduce herself to the royals and hopefuly be welcomed to there home.
Rp sample:Shadowheart rushed in the leaders den and quickly paced around until she finallt sat down and meowed "Ospreyflight and I both agree that something is going on with the herbs. We can hardly find any.... and when we go to our favorite spots where the are bountiful they are gone! They are just gone! It's leaf-bare and you know how low the herbs get but this.... it's not good. We already have a whitecough victum. We need those herbs!"
Secret word: Lioness

[Edward of Pirate's Swoop]

[red]*steals bf computer*

Hello Razzle!

We have a minor problem, though I know your intentions were good. Alexis Bledel is already taken as a face claim (by Annie, the main admin), and you can't call yourself "of Conte" if you are not of Conte, my-dear!

We can't Accept you just yet, I'm sorry![/red]

[Artemis Smythesson]

Also, I don't believe that we accept created countries. But I have to check with the other admins about that.

[Annie of Conté]

Hi and welcome to tortall dreams,

I am the main admin, Annie. Something I don't like straight away is your spacing. There needs to be a space between each category instead of them all being squished up. It is so hard to read and doesn't look very tidy.

Just out of curiosity how do you pronounce the name Ryzzle? It is a very interestying name, so if you wouldn't mind putting how to pronounce it in there.

I do not approve of using another counrty, and would rather not have princess's in court. I am not accepting this unless she is from a country that is said in the books, sorry. And please drop the princess. I know you want to be important, so why not try being a noble lady with lots of wealth and a rich husband/boyfriend?

Appearence is a harder one to do, but please imagine your character better. From your description I cannot imagine what your character looks like. This is a great biography to look at for this section. I don't expect you to write 6 paragraphs on her appearence like i did, but a little more detail would be nice. And, while we are on appearences I have already claimed Alexis Bledel. I feel really bad about it, but we can't have the same claim and because Annie looks like her father, with blue eyes, Alexis was the only choice for me.

Personality is not long enough. Try one paragraph for likes and dislikes, one paragraph explaining how she reacts to others and where her loyalties lie. Has her parents death affected her? Is she emotionaly scared. This is are two good biographies to look at for a guide.

History needs to be altered since i am not accepting her as a princess. Perhaps her father kicked her out of home when her mother died, or something of the sort. Here is a great biography to look at. I expect atleast 3 paragrpahs here...

I am all for developing your rp skills. I have decided to run an rp boot camp, and would like you to participate if you can.

Sorry if I sound mean... I just want to be a good admin:)

[The Goddess]

This application has been denied since you have informed me you are unable to reach our standards...